Cupid’s Squad. A squadron of Cupids launched an attack on me While you stood by my side. The air began to sparkle, the light rejoiced, Beneath your gaze, wide-eyed. The Cupids unfurled their wings into the night— There’s no saving our hearts now, No way to help; For those not yet struck, the arrows are already on their way.more

Could you please let me know if this turned out well in English? I find it quite difficult to come up with English rhymes and carry out translations.more

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